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Song of Storms V2 by ErikShoemaker Song of Storms V2 by ErikShoemaker
This is an update of an older deviation of mine. I wasn't sure how well this update would be received, so I decided to submit a new deviation.
The color scheme is more european compared to the original I guess. There are still things wrong with it, but I like the overall atmosphere much better. And I think the lighting is much more consistent in this version.
Thanks again for your critiques!

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Hi,

This is my first crit! I hope you find it helpful. I'm going to use DA's own suggested method for writing this...

VISION: I'm a huge Zelda fan, so I very much "get" what you are going for. Having the "camera" behind Link puts us in his shoes, and we therefore share his wonder/fear/excitement.

ORIGINALITY: I have seen many photo-manip montages on DA. This one seems to be very mature. You create depth of field, continuous and consistent lighting etc. And you bring the game to life with more than just cosplay at some comic-con.

TECHNIQUE: On this note you have really produced one of the best photo-manip images I have seen. This is a HUGE improvement over the first version. The only problem is with the brighness of the triforce in the mid-ground. That is the first place my eye goes, and it seems to out-compete all of the other components of the image.

IMPACT: This image takes me back to my NES eight bit system.

DEVIOUSNESS: An average rating, considering the above, would be about 85/100.

Cheers,
B
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First of all, this is a LOVELY piece of work!! I think you did an amazing job on the sky; I love the darker atmosphere, it really adds to the piece and gives it that essential mood. That, as well as choosing a sky that matches the golden/white/cream color in the foreground field. You also did an amazing job on the distance shown in the field in the foreground as well as the background; it's flawless in comparison to your original. They blend together nicely. Further back, the horizon on the right blends together in a seemingly effortless realism. That feel continues all the way to the right and is made even more awesome seeing the effort that you put into the tree line on the far right. I'm also amazed at how gorgeous the mist with the smaller fairies in it is. Incredible depth and atmosphere there. You also did a really excellent job on the mountain and adding the identifying cloud circle around it. Plus, I absolutely LOVE the castle in the far off distance. Reminds me of the old days playing OoT when you'd see it off in the distance.

Going back to the foreground, I think you also did a great job on Navi (or any of the other fairies throughout the games that it could be) and the trail behind her. It's the little details that are making this so amazing for me. Another thing, before I keep rambling about Link and Epona, your concentration on light is INCREDIBLE. The Deku tree, the mountain, the field, Link, and Epona - everything - is lit from the correct angle. And kudos to you for changing Epona's contrast to match the lighting. Now back to Link and Epona. I can see that you were very thoughtful and mindful to his outfit. It's stunning and the realism there is also immaculate and incredible. I also love Epona's expression - it really lets you read into the piece. <3

While overall this is a stunning and jaw dropping piece (if I had the money I'd buy one the size of my wall), I do have a few helpful critiques too.
- Loving LoZ, I know that Link doesn't have that long of hair - but somehow you pulled it off and it actually fits in very nicely with the piece.
- His right hand is at a bit awkward of an angle holding his ocarina. I appreciate that it's easier to notice behind him as opposed to at his side, and I love how it catches the light, but its still an awkward angle. It does however also let you imagine that maybe he's trying to hide it away from Ganon's view from the dark castle though.
- Before going back to Link, I actually didn't get right off the bat that that was a triforce in the middle... I see it now, but I think what would make it clearer is if the edge between the top point of the right triangle and the bottom right point of the top triangle as a bit more established as a line. I LOVE this effect, though. It really fits in nicely with the piece.
- These next two things kinda bug me though... But I still love this piece.
1. The sword. Riding on a horse, especially how Link gallops across Hyrule, that sword would not be okay like that. I love all the detail on it and how gorgeous you made it look (incredible) but it's, sadly, not realistic. If that were me riding, it'd be afraid of loosing my sword out the bottom of my belt. It might be okay for walking around though.
1 continued. The sword has no sheath! While it's pretty like that, think about Epona! He side would be bloodied pretty badly and Link might even get a cut or two on his calf or boot.
2. The way Link is riding Epona... I didn't have a problem with this until I looked closer, and because Epona's side is in shadow it still isn't that much of an aesthetic problem...it's just my problem with realism again. If you try to ride a horse like that, you're probably going to fall off. While I know Link does backflips off Epona in TP, that doesn't mean he gets to ride Epona awkwardly. =p If you'll notice, Link's right leg is is back on Epona's flank. It needs to be another shoe-length forward to look more realistic, and in real life, your foot is about midway between the horses's elbow and their knee, on the round part of their belly. Not to mention that riding a horse like that is difficult. You really have to extend your hip back in order to get your foot that far back (talking from experience riding my horse). It looks great in composition, but in realism it doesn't work that well.
(also, not a big deal because since LoZ:TP it hasn't seemed to matter overly much, but Link is originally left handed. In this work he's right handed. Sorry for being a nerd and knowing that. =p)

Overall however, I think this is an amazing piece. A thousand congratulations to you for this awesome fan art and for such a beautiful improvement over the original. This is incredible, and even after writing all this I still don't want to stop looking at this picture. Truly an incredible job. Your attention to detail, lighting, composition and manipulation is flawless.
Absolutely gorgeous. <3
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thekingfisher1208 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  New Deviant
love it beautiful
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you! :)
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urzapw2000 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
wow this is awesome!
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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urzapw2000 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
welcome!
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NintendoGamer5000 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, did this guy use your art without your permission? 
www.youtube.com/watch?v=yomC-h…
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
he did, thanks for letting me know!
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NintendoGamer5000 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, just being a good citizen. :)
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SpellpearlArts Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is unbelieveble fantastic!:heart:
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D thank you! It's actually a really old work already, but I'm happy people still like it
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SpellpearlArts Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is a absolutly so beautyful Scene! And I love the Athmosphere so much!:heart:
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Wesley-Souza Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
amazing work :love: :clap: I'm really speechless :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow: :wow:
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you again man, it's so old already :D
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Wesley-Souza Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
all your works are incredible :P welcome :happybounce:
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melaniebittner00 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
May I use this in a YouTube video? I was looking for backgrounds for a piano cover video, and this one keeps catching my eye. Its breathtaking! I will of course give credit to you. 
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, it's okay for me if you link back to my account. Thanks for asking. :)
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HussainHashim Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome :D (Big Grin) 
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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mariemn Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
This is an amazing work ! I was wondering if I could use this in my cover on youtube ? (I will put a credit for you in the description of course)
Thank you !
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stampadres Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
How do I buy a bigger version of this?
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futureisunclear Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
awesome, that's all i can say
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
enough for me, thanks :D
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Pattedetable Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
Wow, amazing work!
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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VasVadum Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Where's the ultimate favorite button when you need it?
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clumsyandamazing Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
what a masterpiece! :o
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks a lot! :blush:
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Mudoran Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
This piece is absolutely breathtaking. Hats off to you for this. Seriously.
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks a lot for the nice comment!
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FirstPriorityBeats Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Excellent. Truly amazing. I am using it in a youtube video of mine, and I have credited you both in the description and my edit of the picture. Again, excellent job.
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the compliment and thanks for letting me know. Can I get a link to the video?
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you, I'm a big fan of that song and it's always nice to listen to decent remixes. Thanks for the credit.
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Shiro-Tantei Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You sir... Wait you're german. Du mein Lieber bist der Meister des Photoshop ;D Boah ey.. Das sieht so hammer aus *o*
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol, freut mich sehr zu hören. :D Danke für das Kompliment!
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Shiro-Tantei Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kein Problem ;D
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Jinchuruki-Gojira Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Student General Artist
oh my god, this is just amazing. I Stumbled Upon this; it was an article about your piece! I'm at such a loss.
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice, what kind of article? Can you link me to it?
Thanks for the nice comment, glad you like it. :)
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Jinchuruki-Gojira Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student General Artist
It was on Kotaku! Here: [link]

:D It's just so amazing! <3
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah okay, that's an older article. I already knew that one :) Thanks again for the comment!
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Jinchuruki-Gojira Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student General Artist
:D You're so welcome! Man, I wish I could get an article written for myself! xD
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yea :D it's a great honor. I was lucky because Zelda is something everybody knows and likes
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Connectink Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
I believe she was referring to this: kotaku.com/5865807/zeldas-song-of-storms-recreated/
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see, thanks for the link!
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ryyannrawr Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
This truly amazes me!
Art is something I enjoy very much in life, and this is simply genius.
Continue doing creative things.
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the nice compliment! I'm glad my stuff is inspiring to some people :)
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Absolvation Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Stumbled upon this, and I'm glad I did. The Song of Storms is my calling card, and I just love this :la:
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks a lot, glad you like it. :D What do you mean, it's your 'calling card'?
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Absolvation Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's my favorite song from the Zelda franchise, to the point that I got a shirt with the song of storms on it, learned how to play it on guitar, piano, and ocarina, along with the fact that I just love the song >_< Obsessed? I think now :P
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ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha yea it kinda sounds like it :D but I agree the song is really cool. Love it as well!
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